I saw this template set and thought what an amazing set and I gotta find a woman - didn't happen!
I like most of your photos. From a male perspective, just a couple of pointers that gets the blood boiling. Girls, no matter how sexy, looking into space with no passion in their eyes does nothing for us. We do come back and look at the eyes after we have checked out the other stuff - eventually - and when we do, we want to see in the eyes that this has had some effect!! Ego thing. (gosh should I be letting this "mens business stuff out?") LOL (We really like to know that a woman has a heartbeat - not just a body) The twinkle in the eye lets us know that she is there to play - and you really need to get this happening more throughout your set.
Photo on page 14 makes her look oversize and doesn't gel quite with the others in the set but for the rest of them, you have a really good mix ... I do love what you have done as you have created a lot of variety to keep us going to see more of her. Get that passion - some nautiness in her eyes and it will knock the socks off any guy - I really mean that. You do that, and you will have women lined up 10 deep to get your photography of them for their man.
This is where most glamour falls down - the eyes lack passion and that invitational look or feel.
Good stuff.